Students who have never experienced poverty must approach the topic carefully. from a non-English speaking country, that life-changing event is probably their immigration experience. These essays go like this: “My family decided to move to America, and I hated it because I had to struggle to learn English, but I worked really hard, and now I’ve proved that I can do anything.” The details differ slightly, but the basic plotline is the same.
Make certain that there is no possible way for a reader to misinterpret the essay in a negative light. Application essays ask students to discuss the most life-changing events of their young lives. Unfortunately, life-changing though it is, this experience is not unique. And sadly, even the most well-crafted immigration story can be rendered cliché by the sheer number of immigration essays submitted to colleges each year.
These students not only use politically incorrect language (I’ve seen more than one student refer to “the poors” – not a good idea), but also tend to write about their experiences as if they were previously unaware that poor people suffered.
This can easily make students seem hopelessly naïve or, worse yet, self-entitled.
Don’t write about your campaign for student council, the various other positions you held in student council, that time you interned at the mayor’s office, and the leadership award you won.
The message that a resume essay sends to a reader is: “I have nothing of any depth to say about any of the stuff that I’ve done, so I’m just going to list everything I’ve accomplished and hope that you think I’m great.
In an attempt to bolster college applications, tens of thousands of students participate in community service projects. It becomes somewhat less awesome when students write about their community service projects without fully considering how their essays might be misconstrued.
This type of essay describes some sort of service project.
Students spend their entire high school lives building a list of impressive accomplishments and extracurricular activities.
It’s little surprise that many students write about this in their application essays.